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diff --git a/doc/installation.xml b/doc/installation.xml
index 2394ed3..ae46e14 100644
--- a/doc/installation.xml
+++ b/doc/installation.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $Id: installation.xml,v 1.8 2001-11-08 12:36:15 adam Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Id: installation.xml,v 1.9 2001-11-18 21:14:22 adam Exp $ -->
  <chapter id="installation"><title>Compilation and Installation</title>
   
   <sect1><title>Introduction</title>
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
        </para></listitem>
      </varlistentry>
      <varlistentry><term><literal>--disable-shared</literal></term>
-      <listitem><para>The make process will be not create
+      <listitem><para>The make process will not create
         static libraries (<filename>.a</filename>).
         By default, static libraries are created -
         equivalent to <literal>--enable-static</literal>.
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
 
      <varlistentry><term><filename>lib/libyazthread.la</filename></term>
       <listitem><para>
-        When threading is supported/enabled by configure this GNU libtool
+        When threading is supported/enabled by configure this Libtool
         library is created. It includes functions that allows &yaz;
         to use threads.
        </para></listitem></varlistentry>
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
        </para></listitem></varlistentry>
      
      <varlistentry><term><filename>yaz-config</filename></term>
-      <listitem><para>A Bourne-shell script, generate by configure, that
+      <listitem><para>A Bourne-shell script, generated by configure, that
         specifies how external applications should compile - and link with
         &yaz;.
        </para></listitem></varlistentry>
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@
         A simple shell implemented on top of the 
         <link linkend="zoom">ZOOM</link> functions.
         The shell is a command line application that allows you to enter
-        simple commands perform to perform ZOOM operations.
+        simple commands to perform ZOOM operations.
        </para></listitem></varlistentry>
 
      <varlistentry><term><filename>zoom/zoomtst1</filename>, 
@@ -213,9 +213,9 @@
    </para>
    
    <para>
-    If you wish to install &yaz; in system directories such as 
+    If you wish to install &yaz; in system directories  
     <filename>/usr/local/bin</filename>,
-    <filename>/usr/local/lib</filename> you can type:
+    <filename>/usr/local/lib</filename> .. etc, you can type:
    </para>
    
    <screen>
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@
    </para>
    
    <para>
-    If you wish to perform an un-installation of &yaz; use:
+    If you wish to perform an un-installation of &yaz;, use:
    </para>
    
    <screen>
@@ -258,8 +258,8 @@
      require you to pass more options to your linker/compiler.
     </para>
     <para>
-     The <filename>yaz-config</filename> script accepts the options
-     that makes the <filename>yaz-config</filename> script print
+     The <filename>yaz-config</filename> script accepts command line
+     options that makes the <filename>yaz-config</filename> script print
      options that you should use in your make process.
      The most important ones are:
      <literal>--cflags</literal>, <literal>--libs</literal>
@@ -267,8 +267,8 @@
      </para>
     <para>
      A small and complete <literal>Makefile</literal> for a C
-     application consisting of one source file
-     <filename>myprog.c</filename> may look like this:
+     application consisting of one source file,
+     <filename>myprog.c</filename>, may look like this:
      <screen>
       YAZCONFIG=/usr/local/bin/yaz-config
       CFLAGS=`$(YAZCONFIG) --cflags`
@@ -278,8 +278,8 @@
       </screen>
      </para>
     <para>
-     The CFLAGS string will consists of an option that will set the
-     include path to the <emphasis>parent</emphasis> directory
+     The CFLAGS variable consists of a C compiler directive that will set
+     the include path to the <emphasis>parent</emphasis> directory
      of <filename>yaz</filename>. That is, if &yaz; header files were
      installed in <filename>/usr/local/include/yaz</filename>,
      then include path is set to <filename>/usr/local/include</filename>.
@@ -299,9 +299,9 @@
      Libtool acrhive(s) for &yaz; rather than the ordinary ones.
     </para>
     <para>
-     Applications that wish to use the threaded version of &yaz;
-     should specify <literal>threads</literal> after the
-     other options. When <literal>threads</literal> is given
+     For applications using the threaded version of &yaz;,
+     specify <literal>threads</literal> after the
+     other options. When <literal>threads</literal> is given,
      more flags and linker flags will be printed by
      <filename>yaz-config</filename>. If our previous example was
       using threads, you'd have to modify the lines that set
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@
       LIBS=`$(YAZCONFIG) --libs threads`
      </screen>
      There is no need specify POSIX thread libraries in your Makefile.
-     The <literal>LIBS</literal> includes that as well.
+     The <literal>LIBS</literal> variable includes that as well.
     </para>
    </sect2>
   </sect1>
@@ -422,9 +422,9 @@
     <para>
      Some people are confused by the fact that we use the nmake
      tool to build &yaz;. They think they have to do that too - in order
-     to make WIN32 applications using &yaz;. The good news is that
+     to make their WIN32 applications work with &yaz;. The good news is that
      you don't have to. You can use the integrated environement of
-     Visual Studio if desired.
+     Visual Studio if desired for your own application.
     </para>
     <para>
      When setting up a project or Makefile you have to set the following: